Comments : Washing the World Away

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awesome job, like any other poem. You used the title very nicely, had some great word choice, and had a great flow to the poem. Nice work. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    The windows to my soul
    are smeared with hate filled dirt.
    My heart now has a hole
    filled up with tears and hurt.

    I love every last stanza, but this one stuck out the most....great work 5/5