Wow......touched my heart
It was veryy good.I am really impressed.I hope i could write such thing.You are really Creative,it seems you have very strong emotions.Really i dont have words to praise what i have read and juddged you from your writing.It is really verry good.
I am submitting my poems in this forrum and i need people like you to read them,give me suggestions and corrections,so that i can also improve my abilities.It will be very nice of you,if you please take out some time and read my few submitted poems.I would love to hear some possitive criticism from your side.
Love
Junaid