Pointless is life

by Ash   Jun 21, 2008


It's over now.
Pointless is life
and so
remains everything else
a morbid vision
of lies,
deception and a fatal attraction.

Let silence now speak
of the words
that remain unheard,
of the pain that tortures
this soul through which
humility and disgrace prevail
through thin lines of yet
another wasteful day.

The day will come
when all will fail
and the painting
of life will fall
so low down
below the earths surface,
never to be resurrected again!

If life cannot love,
then let me not live,
through these bonds
forged with words
that may soon delve
beneath the surface
of the real truth,
the mask that hides
all evidence of the torture
within each mind may find
and yet it's gone...
It's too late to survive.

Give it all up.
Pointless and futile
remain each attempt
and may you not
see that which may gleam.
The light that may
cast darkness aside.
Through faded paths,
Now rise my child,
for freedom from
all clutches be claimed.
Once again rise,
and declare your fame!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Gud1...

  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Truelyan intertwined beauty of things beautifully yet to come i love the form and flow keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hello
    I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
    I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Well well what to say here?
    "The day will come
    when all will fail
    and the painting
    of life will fall
    so low down
    below the earths surface,
    never to be resurrected again!"
    life can be fake and all painted with fake things, i liked that part

    "If life cannot love,
    then let me not live,"
    wow, very brave decision and wise one but don't kill yourself we need you here ^_^

    "Now rise my child,
    for freedom from
    all clutches be claimed.
    Once again rise,
    and declare your fame! "
    very good ending, it's like the begining of new life and new tale

    don't stop writting :)

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