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This is very lovely poem. I think the second stanza was very great.

I can relate to first stanza because I happen to be in this kind of situation. But it was not that awesome. I think it was exhausting neverending torture of your own money, pleasing people and trying creat a hard shell outiside while inside is breaking down. That is was to me.

But for some other people it might be something very great, who knows.

You did a great job writing this. Awesome word. Well done!

Wow, what a wonderful and funy poem.

Idk...I don't really like this poem (just b/c it's not my style) but I couldn't help but smile when I read it. I find it kind've cute and I like the word fabulousity. lol It wan't what I expected and that's always a good thing because It reflects a unique writing style.
Much luv
Jonda Beth