Human rain

by JD   Jun 21, 2008


Wind singing; Distant prayers.
My soul crying; Desperate tears.
Bridges of faith, crossing my heart.
Oceans, separating love; apart.

Shrinking walls; dark places.
Despairing love; forgettable faces.
Kisses running away from fate;
Onto lips of a soul mate.

Doubt screaming; its angry voice.
Darkness falling, theres no choice.
My broken pieces falling, human rain;
let me scream; let me break again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    OH WOW , this was beautiful.
    Your expressions were so explicit I was captured by the poem .This is one of the best ones I have read in so long, If you were to put these heartfelt expressions into a poem of beauty it would be undescribable
    EVERY LINE WAS A COMPLETE STORY
    Thank you JD you touched my heart with one
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tierra

    Wow i really like this one.