by Kik Jun 21, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I try to be lyrical, |
by H E Losey
This being the second write of yours that I have read, let me say, much better. You have a pretty good rhythm going and your rhyme at least is chartable : abcadeafgha. |
Oh, nice! This made me realize that you want to be a unique poet =) Great work. 5/5. |