Wow! that was a very emotional wrapped poem. i thought it was very good and totally came from the heart. I personally liked the last stanzas better than the first two,which is okay, keep them there, theyre totally you, i just got more into in the 3rd one.. i also loved the last line.. thats a guy for ya lol... keep it up!..keep writing. 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23

Hi hun. thanks for your comment on my poem, "you can't love me anymore." i personally love all off your work. i'm a huge fan and i truly believe you should seriously consider publishing a book. i'm still in the process of finishing reading all your poems. almost getting there. most of all thank you for taking the time to read and giving feedback. i love and appreciate honesty. i hope you always have a good day. chow.