by Sean Allen May 31, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look up at the crystalline blue skies; |
by Kevin J
I keep forgetting to thank you for your comment on my poem:p, so umm yea, Thanx;) |
by Kevin J
I dont know if you took the advice to change the second stanza, but what I read is perfect just the way it is ;) |
by Sean Allen
Good point about the second stanza Aken, I just can't think of anything to change it to! |
by Aken Sol
Another love sonnet from the great Sean. Love, isn't it confusing sometimes? Your poem is great but you might want to change the 2nd stanza, because the end words sound the same, to make it even better. |