Another love sonnet from the great Sean. Love, isn't it confusing sometimes? Your poem is great but you might want to change the 2nd stanza, because the end words sound the same, to make it even better.
Aken Sol

Good point about the second stanza Aken, I just can't think of anything to change it to!

I dont know if you took the advice to change the second stanza, but what I read is perfect just the way it is ;)
Nice write!

I keep forgetting to thank you for your comment on my poem:p, so umm yea, Thanx;)