Comments : Behind the bathroom door

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    My sister, who I am now in charge since our parents died two years ago, she is now sixteen. Well, when she was four, we had a cousin named chuck who did the same thing to her then. Well, lets just say, when I found this out, i gave that a guy a new hole in his head. not with a gun. I beat the snot out of him. Oh, this really ticks me off. Nice poem though.
    Nice Write From Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    THis is such a powerful poem and the flow is incredible. Im sorry you had to go through that. No child or person for that matter should be hurt/tortured that way. 5/5 good job on expressing your feelings

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    This really was powerful, and know that you gained more of your power back by expressing how you feel and what happened. 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    Thats so horrible but well written. Amazing how far back you can remember when someones left u tainted

  • My heart just dropped to the ground.... and out of it bleeds the pain you have expressed. If you ever need someone, I'm your ninja and you better know that!

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Well written + 5/5 Im so dearly sorry that this happend...

  • 16 years ago

    by pending

    Written wonderfully!!!
    So sorry that happened.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    OMG! This is one of the best poems I have ever read. I could feel your emotions and all your pain screaming throgh the poem! I am really sorry that this happened to you =(