I scream out to a silent god,
but razorblades don't ever answer back.
Fall down for one last time,
eaten by the ocean crimson and black

powerful imagery. love it

Wow that was absolutely amazing. i could feel the enmotin. that was a really great poem. i give it a 5/5

Ur words and thoughts r clear beautiful writing Beautifully written

Wow this was one of the most powerful and memorable poems that i have read in a while. i don't really know what to say because no words can describe how amazing this poem was for me. it really got me thinking about a lot of stuff. most things i can say are going to be a complete understatement but this piece was just amazing. you really have got a lot of talent!!! you really have got such a beautiful style of writing!!! 100/5

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