Full Moon

by Rachelle   Jun 22, 2008


A full moon tonight
I want u 2 hold me tight
In the darkness of the night
a single candlelight
2 show us the way
I just wanted 2 say
I Love U!

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  • 15 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    Your flow was well done! The rhyme was amazing and worded really well. Short and sweet and to the point is always the best. REally well done! 5/5 :)

    -Sara

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Another really good poem.
    They're really short but still carry alot of emotion. This one's a bit happier than the last one i read =) Keep writing!!!
    Aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    ...5/5 for me

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    I love it. its amazing short but yet you get the message i like just a candlelight...amazing as usual.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Short and sweet i loved it!