Comments : Full Moon

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    "Close your eyes and I'll kiss you
    Tomarow I'll miss you,
    and remember, I'll always be true.
    And then While I'm away,
    I'll write home every day
    And pretend that I'm always with you."

    Great write from Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    So simple but vary paworful

    and awww

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Short and sweet i loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    I love it. its amazing short but yet you get the message i like just a candlelight...amazing as usual.

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    ...5/5 for me

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Another really good poem.
    They're really short but still carry alot of emotion. This one's a bit happier than the last one i read =) Keep writing!!!
    Aish
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    Your flow was well done! The rhyme was amazing and worded really well. Short and sweet and to the point is always the best. REally well done! 5/5 :)

    -Sara