by RobinAnn13 Jun 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Your heart speaks to me |
by Jad
This was a good poem and even though it had no rhyme it still kept to what it was talking about. I liked the emotion. Keep it up. |
Time to think... |
by Not Enough
Wow, I really like how you don't use any rhyme because it keeps the reader focused on the subject. Most of mine are rhyme, only because I'm addicted to it lol and sometimes the message is lost. I really like the last two lines. I cant really explain why but I just really like them. I love the title as well. |