Broken and Bleeding

by emovampire   Jun 22, 2008


I was alive but dead inside..,
Then he brought me to life
He made me complete he built me up
I didn't feel obsolete......

But then he was gone
And I was left to walk along and realize...
That my soul was dead and my heart shred...........
But I had no more tears left to shed
Even though I would feel relief the tears won't come How could I have been so dumb??

He ripped a whole through my chest .....
It felt like when I said "good bye I'll always love you" It took away my last breath
Now I don't even notice when I breath, or blink, or eat, or sleep......

I'm drifting through "life" broken and bleeding and... Standing alone I'm just the shell of my former self ...... I feel like I'm trapped in a glass box and I want to scream and I want to shout......
But my lungs are filled with doubt.........

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  • 14 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    I like this poem.. But I felt like it could be longer. I wanted to keep reading more. Other than that I liked it. I could feel your emotion and i'm sure there's a few people who unfortunatley know how youu feel as I do as well. Nice job,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Wow. Beautiful.. I'm so amazed at the description of the situation, the detail, you made it so that its completely imagined. I felt it strongly in my heart.. Keep writing like this. I can only imagin what you went through to be able to pour your heart out with such depth.

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