Wow. Beautiful.. I'm so amazed at the description of the situation, the detail, you made it so that its completely imagined. I felt it strongly in my heart.. Keep writing like this. I can only imagin what you went through to be able to pour your heart out with such depth.

I like this poem.. But I felt like it could be longer. I wanted to keep reading more. Other than that I liked it. I could feel your emotion and i'm sure there's a few people who unfortunatley know how youu feel as I do as well. Nice job,5/5