Comments : Without you

  • 16 years ago

    by JD

    "when I awake up there no point of living without you"
    I like that part the best, relates to me.
    I like the title too.
    I have one called Without me.
    Theres some spelling and grammar mistakes in your poem though.
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    I know how u feel..life wouldnt be nothing without love and happinness