Comments : Alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Well this is a thought provoking piece. It flows well. It is short and to the point...Nice job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Always searching,
    never finding
    => Yes. *smiles* When you find something you stop to search, most of people... But...searching itself...can be a life aim. Good begin.

    Lost Forever,
    while in a crowd
    => I know the feeling.. I remember...I have some memories...I stood...waiting the traffic lights turn green...in Chong wen men...in Bei jing...Yes...so lost..

    Only one
    is what I need
    => I think these lines can be understood in many way... Maybe you didn't mean this way... But first thing crossed my mind was God...Allah is only thing I need.. Because one of the 99 beautiful names of Allah is the The One (only one)

    Everyone Suffers
    the pain......Alone
    => Yes...that is true...

    This is a good poem. I like it... It creates a lot of images and emotions in me... :)