Perfection, Pleasure, Peace

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Jun 22, 2008


Utopian fantasies that
Circle 'round your head like
Sugarplums and candy canes the
Night Before Christmas
Immerse you into
Blindness to the
antithesis which,
so clearly,
you exist in.

You've found perfection (in your dreams)
You've found pleasure (in your dreams)
You've found peace (in your dreams)

You wake to find you lost
all
three
overnight.

Waking up sometimes is the
worst
nightmare
of
all.

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  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Honestly amazing and pure. It is definitely true.
    I gave it a 5/5 !

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    -Hannah

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

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    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nil

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  • 16 years ago

    by AngelEyez89

    Hey i really liked this, well done. great flow.

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