Why you hade come my life

by smiley   Jun 23, 2008


Why did you come my life

Why did you have make my life better

Why did you make me fall in love with you

Why did you have to go and leave me heart broken

I love you why will you break my heart and go you made me who I am and you leave why you have come to my life

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  • 16 years ago

    by T uh Belle lll

    This poem has many grammatical errors. I have edited the poem for you:

    Why did you have to come into my life?

    Why did you have to make my life better?

    Why did you make me fall in love with you?

    Why did you have to go and break my heart?

    I love you, why did you break my heart and go?

    You made me who I am and you left.

    Why did you have come into my life?

    It seems like English is your second language, and I hope my corrections will be useful to you. I hope you enjoy this form of expression, and this learning experience. Keep at it.

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