Life

by Ashley   Jun 23, 2008


Teary eyes; the tears of a child
Child cries; cries for the loss of someone close
Love dies; dies within years of loneliness
Ripping seams; of the heart sewn back together too much
Chilling screams; of the people who cannot withstand this hell
Blood gleams; from the suicide victims who give up hope
Why die; when you mean the world to someone
Don't cry; im here to save you from this darkness
People lie; too keep us from the awful truth until were ready
Darkness calls; calls upon he who will take us all from here
Dimming halls; from the candle slowly burning out
Scrapes on walls; the walls that have kept in the secrets
Death falls; upon those too weak to fight
Reapers slaves; they who give into temptation
Skeleton caves; skeletons of those who've died in our past
Buried graves; deep within the cold night ghosts walk along their graves still seeking the answer to life

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The imagery is very powerfully haunting with adds to the mood you were after
    the poems flow is right on to deliver this strong theme

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey this is a very unique write... enjoyed reading it...

    "Why die; when you mean the world to someone
    Don't cry; im here to save you from this darkness"

    ^^ this is very touching...

    "Skeleton caves; skeletons of those who've died in our past
    Buried graves; deep within the cold night ghosts walk along their graves still seeking the answer to life "

    the ending is brilliant...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a great poem with alot of great description and flow. Not much to say but i liked it^^

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    I liked how the first 2 words had rhymin stuff, and then the explination of them afterwards
    :O 5/5 :D

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Interesting poem but i mean that in a good way...i really enjoyed reading this because it different then a lot of other poem out there. keep it up!!! 5/5

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