Interesting poem but i mean that in a good way...i really enjoyed reading this because it different then a lot of other poem out there. keep it up!!! 5/5

I liked how the first 2 words had rhymin stuff, and then the explination of them afterwards
:O 5/5 :D

Wow a great poem with alot of great description and flow. Not much to say but i liked it^^

Hey this is a very unique write... enjoyed reading it...

"Why die; when you mean the world to someone
Don't cry; im here to save you from this darkness"

^^ this is very touching...

"Skeleton caves; skeletons of those who've died in our past
Buried graves; deep within the cold night ghosts walk along their graves still seeking the answer to life "

the ending is brilliant...

keep writing..

The imagery is very powerfully haunting with adds to the mood you were after
the poems flow is right on to deliver this strong theme

well done