Cynical View; A sad truth about our life.

by Crystal Gaze   Jun 23, 2008


Cynical View; A sad truth about our life..
By: Paula.C.

We live in a life where,
the innocent are doubted
and the guilty are guiltless.

It's a place where the sun can't shine because it's covered by the dark clouds of our unjust actions...

It's our society...
where the deserving get [Nothing]
And the undeserving get [Everything]

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Random inspiration, it started as a quote... but then it was too long so I submitted it as a poem.
Please let me know what you think..
Thanks.x

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Honestly I couldn't agree more with your words. It seems that the people who work the hardest get the least amount of pay and the people who work the least are the ones who have everything. Amazing job and the words are so true, Excellent job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Random but good. A little bit of advice
    when make a non-rhyming poem the
    flow is the main key to a great poem.
    Your flow was honestly not good at all.
    I liked the story you put to words but
    it just didn't fit. You know what I mean?
    Keep trying and you'll only get better.
    <3tay
    4/5

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