Random but good. A little bit of advice
when make a non-rhyming poem the
flow is the main key to a great poem.
Your flow was honestly not good at all.
I liked the story you put to words but
it just didn't fit. You know what I mean?
Keep trying and you'll only get better.
<3tay
4/5

Honestly I couldn't agree more with your words. It seems that the people who work the hardest get the least amount of pay and the people who work the least are the ones who have everything. Amazing job and the words are so true, Excellent job 5/5 GG23