by Christina Hobbs Jun 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I found a penny today |
BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE IT! |
by Josh
I absolutly love this poem. The only thing I might change is when you write "to make a smile out of your frown" it is kind of a mouthfull to say but it might roll off the tounge better if you were to write "to make a smile from your frown" just a suggestion but I really do love this poem, I have never thought of pennies in that way. |