First off, I love this poem. I haven't been able to write much in free verse lately, so I enjoy reading poems in that style that are great like this.

Only thing I had trouble with was this line:
"Starry night of peaceful ominous with him."

It just didn't make complete sense to me when it was "peaceful ominous". I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct, but I may be mistaken and it could be fine. It just sounded strange to me.

Other than that great poem. 5/5