Please

by Goodbye   Jun 23, 2008


Please come and hold me
I lay broken on the floor
Old wounds are open now
Sad tears begin to pour.

Please come and hold me
Wrap me in your arms
Hug me like a teddy bear
carry me bed to sleep

Please, come and hold me,
I sit here all alone.
No gentle words to warm me,
No love at all is shown

Please, come and hold me,
I lay broken on the floor.
My tender heart is dying,
My tears are all ignored.

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Edited with help of Lone Warrior.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Your poems are good...
    your poems are touchy...
    and this one is no exception...
    you are a good writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Attila Nyitrai

    I like it cause this poem is very "thinking", and realy deep.
    I realy like this vers:

    "Please come and hold me
    Pick up my teddy bear from corner
    Take me in your arms
    and carry me back to bed to sleep"

    And thanks for your comments! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Dear sister Norie... that was so touching...

    Keep writing..

    Best wishz...

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    AWSOME POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by ameena

    I really like this poem...as i was reading it i felt ur pain..it is really sad how there are so many people in the world that feel that way
    but anyway great job i give u
    5/5...:]

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