This time; I need to feel what one become when not taken
All fine; when you stir my soul for it is not yet shaken
A journey; the path ahead may be steep but worth climbing
Don't burn me; just walk with me toward better timing
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That is a great stanza and a great poem. You kept the rhyme and flow going all the way through. enjoyed it very much

FABULOUS(5/5)
I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
Love
Junaid

I must say I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the flow, and I like your structure... you just a different way of expressing yourself and I liked it... It was different and nice.. I liked the idea of being a damsel and admitting to things. Good job!