Wow this is a really great poem i love it
you are a really great writer
better then me
keep up the asome work

I agree its a really amazing poem
I loved it so much

keep it up

Bitter words to a liar. Truth never hurts like the lies. Sweet lies...whispers that relieved the sorrow for a moment...makes your heart tender and vulnerable... But then...in the moment you find out the truth.... It feels like... Someone push a knife on your back...but you don't feel it first...but then...the person takes it off...and the blood starts running out..... It hurts...this bleeding...Broken trust need more than just plaster cast..

A sad and yet painful write of a love that could not last. Strange be the world wherein we live - on one side love may be easily declared only to be thrown back upon our face.
Excellent work and so expressive! Keep it up...
100/5

Great poem. liked it alot and keep it up.

There are always two loosers.... Not one I suppose....

Just joking...

This was a nice poem..

keep it up

Best wishz... Karan

Wooooooow, this poem is incredible and I really can feel ur pain, but you this is a man's habit, cheating and lying is not strange for men.