Omg this is so crazy usually i dnt like to read long poems but you had a very very wonderful hook omg this is crazy and it makes you think that people do do this stuff these days.They are out having fun and not realy thinking of trouble till they see someone who does not look like em then to be cool infront of their friends they kill or in this case hurt.Know they are spending their lives behind bars all becasue they wanted to be cool. And this is so sad cause it happends all the time nothing ever really changes around here! I loved this it brought a tear to my eye!((5))

This poem is pretty good. Its a strong dose of reality. So people need to take the medicine.