Through the darking woods i go,
to see the dark trees fade around me,
at the heart of a distant forest,
in which in my past was filled with bright sunlight,
shadow's of the midnight sky,
i walk in the starless sky,
here the clouds are gathering,
in my cold moonless sky,
the shadows hung down over my eyes,
then the darking clouds drew all the light from my eyes,
and then the raindrop comes in a darking rain,
i spill my memories on the ground,
to see it rain down in hot embers of purple rain,
now down the dark streams i go,
which seaward creeps silently in the mist,
the fog comes over me,
it sits,
and looks,
over me and my distant forest,
contained and alone.
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I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
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I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
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