This was really a sweet poetic story to read. I was very happy with the ending. 5/5

I agree very much with soso.
It was quite captivating, I enjoyed it greatly.
the concept that love never dies, and sometimes it's right infront of you without you knowing it, or even that maybe it just wasn't your time to find it, is rather intriguing and oddly comforting.

Nicely written,
5. Paula.

3/5. It's just that this seemed like so much more of a short story with sentences separated by line breaks. Although you certainly told a story, it didn't feel like a poetic or a particularly special telling; you just kind of said what happened, in plain language, with plain syntax. Perhaps you could rework it using some more interesting techniques.

I'd appreciate comments on "Calling" and "Wakeful". Thanks in advance.