Comments : Death Becomes Her

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Unique story well depicted and an enjoyable read( the wench!). I think the first line in the second stanza could be shortened to improve the metre, I'm not sure how though. Perhaps:
    " Her beauty lingers, even in death".
    As alwasy an opinion. You are still one of the best poets here, again my opinion.