Wow! this is really good i like it a lot..the flow of it is amazing, and im sure that your dad would love it just as much as i do!! Great Job 5/5 :D

Wow. i have to say this is ur best 1 yet. i've read all of urs but this 1 is so good that i just had 2 comment on!! it's so real and just amazing! slim shady has some real compitition ;)
5/5
xoxo
~waiting~