Oh yeah this is so sensitive...this is a very simple poem to describe just a very great feeling towards ur mother's being wz u in ur special moments...
u r a great poet:)
Congrats again..I'm happy for u:)..* Hugs *

Dang girl that is really touching. why don't yo mama live wit you? is yo parents divorced? an i hope dat you always cherish yo mama. an keep up da good work. this poem brought a tear ta my eye. i miss my mama tons.

A very touching piece. very heartfelt, yet sad. plus it's beautiful in every way. i loved this poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Aww thats sweet and sad...

That is so touching...Always stay close to your mom i have a story on that of my father and his mother... 9/11/01 was the day my grandma sadly passed away but,it had nothing to do with the boming it was an alchol addiction...At the time i lived in Kansas i was 7 or 8 and i did not understand how she died...but, we drove out to Arizona to attend her funeral watching my father put the box of her ashes in the ground was the first time i ever saw my dad shead a tear...and i asked him why he cried and he said that he will never be the same with his mother gone....

Well great poem...

:)

Kathleen