Hey this was a really good poem

keep it up :)

This is a good poem... but some parts seemed to rhyme and other parts didnt... and that kinda threw the flow off a little..

but it was such a true poem for alot of people.

overall it was okay. 4/5

A nice poem written with delicacy

keep it up

Wonderful bella, really wonderful. go on like that

If I could, I would give u 100/5....Ur poem really touched me..It rocked me inside..
In fact,I didn't give much attention to rhyme ...I just cared about how u expressed ur emotions ...
Great job,plz keep it up:)..

Awsome piece... very extra ordinary

Very nice job. 5/5

Very nice job. 5/5

A very nicely written poem, I loved the way you provoked anticipation from past to present to future then ... while you know that the secret will remain untold and you made it clear in the end ...

I loved it :)

Wow. this poem is great.