Deep Inside the Forest

by SoUrNameIsTia   Jun 24, 2008


In the forest,
deep inside it's core,
runs a wild creek,
that makes you feel so calm.

It's a place of luxury,
a place of life,
for all of mother natures creatures,
to just roam free.

Blossomed vines clinging to trees,
Leaves of all shades of green,
canopy up above,
the water ripples below,
and you see a family of tadpoles,
swimming happily.

Deep inside the forest,
nature plays by itself,
where there are all formations,
of beauty.

--All Poems by Tia E
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  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was cool and very different from what im use to read! kool-ei-ooo!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    First off thankyou for reading my poem.

    I love this poem its so beautiful.
    The way you described the trees..

    " deep inside its core"...very strong eotion there

    "a place of luxury.."
    "the water ripples below"

    the word choice is amazing.

    "Deep inside the forest,
    nature plays by itself,
    where there are all formations,
    of beauty. "

    nature plays by itself...away from all the commotion of people who took over this earth...a peaceful place where it lies.

    all formations of beauty....there hidden very deep within away from us.

    very nice job.

    ~ Angie.

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