First off thankyou for reading my poem.

I love this poem its so beautiful.
The way you described the trees..

" deep inside its core"...very strong eotion there

"a place of luxury.."
"the water ripples below"

the word choice is amazing.

"Deep inside the forest,
nature plays by itself,
where there are all formations,
of beauty. "

nature plays by itself...away from all the commotion of people who took over this earth...a peaceful place where it lies.

all formations of beauty....there hidden very deep within away from us.

very nice job.

~ Angie.

That was cool and very different from what im use to read! kool-ei-ooo!!