Something very familiar about this poem. It kind of explains the times guys get turned down by a girl and they say but you are like my brother. This poem really put into perspective how the girl feels. I liked it.

I really really really really LOVED this poem! The choice of words and the rhymes are simply beautiful..
Keep writing cause when I read poems like these I have hope that this world will not lose it's sense to discribe it's feelings and emotions and put them into words. These days all what people care about is electronics and cars and make-up, rarely you find people who love to read and love to write poems and stories or whatever..

Wow, love it :)

This is beautiful.
i love it.
it describes how i feel about my situation.
good job sweets.
keep it up
<3Ashley