Daddy

by sweet escape   Jun 24, 2008


I always was a daddy's girl
Even form the moment I entered the world.
He won my heart while mother was away
In the army for many a day.
He would stay up with me while I was sick.
Not sleep for days and not give a lick.

Daddy went to work when mommy came home.
He went truck driving, the country he would roam.
Every night he would call.
And each night I made his heart fall.
With what little words I could say
From sunny to dark would turn his day.
"Home Daddy?" I'd ask him
And with that the call was fin.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow. Excellent for sure. The emotion is excellent. I really like the rhyming except for the last line. I really don't like how you ended it. The emotion just wasn't as good, nor was the flow. Still 5/5

    Soda E>

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is so cute! You admire your dad from adar, there aren't many who do so.
    The tale is touching, and a subject that some can relate to. The choosing of words is simple and true.
    Nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww...cute! I love this one! I love daddy poems! This one is perfect! Awesome work.

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I liked this a lot. It's a beautiful piece from a daughter, to a father, and it shows how much you care about him. I liked that this came from the heart. Good job. 5/5

    -Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow touching one , !!! you seem liek your daddy alot and he seem to ike him too , !!! great expression
    specialy when you mentioned the roaming and he used to call you that is really touching , !!:)

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