This was a very touching piece about your father and I could really feel the love you expressed with your nice choice of words and flawless rhythm. Well done *5/5*

This is a wonderful piece of work...I am sure your father will cherish this write...Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us...may peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday..

sadaddy

I liked the flow in ur poem and I liked how u expressed ur feelings towards ur father..really good job,keep it up:)..

Wow touching one , !!! you seem liek your daddy alot and he seem to ike him too , !!! great expression
specialy when you mentioned the roaming and he used to call you that is really touching , !!:)

I liked this a lot. It's a beautiful piece from a daughter, to a father, and it shows how much you care about him. I liked that this came from the heart. Good job. 5/5

-Briana

Aww...cute! I love this one! I love daddy poems! This one is perfect! Awesome work.

This poem is so cute! You admire your dad from adar, there aren't many who do so.
The tale is touching, and a subject that some can relate to. The choosing of words is simple and true.
Nice poem 5/5

Wow. Excellent for sure. The emotion is excellent. I really like the rhyming except for the last line. I really don't like how you ended it. The emotion just wasn't as good, nor was the flow. Still 5/5

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