ANGER!!!

by sweet escape   Jun 24, 2008


Anger rolls off me like a wave
Those who stick around must be brave.
I could snap at any moment today
It is best to stay far, far away.
My smile, you will NOT see.
For, today, it's not part of me.

Anger rolls off me like a waterfall.
There is no way you can get behind my wall.
The wall, built of anger and pain
can't be torn down, one inch, you will not gain.
Humor and love can't even touch it.
So what makes you think you can get behind it with a fit.

You rage only builds up the wall.
Now there is no way it will fall.
Anger vs. anger, head to head
By tonight we may just be dead!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A nice description of the feeling anger.
    When you're angry, there is nothing that can get to you until the anger is setisfyed.
    Nice work on the imagary choosing of words.
    Liked this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    I really like this one bcuz it is pretty much well put together it has an ok flow. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    This was an okay piece. I wasn't blown away, though. I didn't really like the title, because it tells the reader exactly what to expect. And to be honest, I didn't really feel any emotion from it. Yes, it was talking about anger, but it just didn't come off as real emotion. 4/5

    -Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow , i am really impressed , the way and presions of the description
    !!!
    you had me fear the anger , adn knowing you i sould be now !!!:)
    hehehe
    great excelent work

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm pretty good, but not one of your best... the stanzas are nice, and the last stanza adds a bit of humor to the piece

    It is best to stay far, far away.
    My mile, you will NOT see.

    ^^ in my opinion I would not double the far, far away part, one far would suffice. Also my Smile, you will not see < you forgot the S is all. still a nice piece I would just make those minor changes, but thats just me... 4/5

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