I liked this poem alot. I love how you use anger and how anger at the end could kill, which it can its possiable. I've never read a poem like that before and its amazing.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Hmm. I'm not so sure where to start with this piece. First of all, I didn't really love the title. "ANGER!!!" is just so... obvious. I like anger to ooze out of the least unsuspecting places, to not be so obvious. You told us straight away what your poem was going to be about; there was no mystery for us.

I feel some of the rhyming here was forced as well:

"
Anger rolls off me like a waterfall.
There is no way you can get behind my wall."

^^ This, for example, seems really forced. It's understandable what you're trying to say, but it just doesn't flow good.

I didn't enjoy this line either: "So what makes you think you can get behind it with a fit." Sorry, but it just didn't fit.

It's not bad, hun. I just feel you could have come out with something better than this.

4/5.

Hmmm pretty good, but not one of your best... the stanzas are nice, and the last stanza adds a bit of humor to the piece

It is best to stay far, far away.
My mile, you will NOT see.

^^ in my opinion I would not double the far, far away part, one far would suffice. Also my Smile, you will not see < you forgot the S is all. still a nice piece I would just make those minor changes, but thats just me... 4/5

Wow , i am really impressed , the way and presions of the description
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you had me fear the anger , adn knowing you i sould be now !!!:)
hehehe
great excelent work

This was an okay piece. I wasn't blown away, though. I didn't really like the title, because it tells the reader exactly what to expect. And to be honest, I didn't really feel any emotion from it. Yes, it was talking about anger, but it just didn't come off as real emotion. 4/5

-Briana

I really like this one bcuz it is pretty much well put together it has an ok flow. Good job!

A nice description of the feeling anger.
When you're angry, there is nothing that can get to you until the anger is setisfyed.
Nice work on the imagary choosing of words.
Liked this poem 5/5