Broken smile

by Nobody   Jun 24, 2008


Why did you take an innocent girl
and break her down till there was nothing more?
She was confused and alone
then you came along and she was not on her own
but you slowly poisoned her mind
You made her fall astray
tortured and betray
You took her heart and shattered it
crushing it into dust
for all you saw in her was lust
All you wanted was pleasure
you did not realize that she was a treasure
you took her care free spirit
and tore it to pieces
you saw the pain in her eyes
the smile she wore was but a disguise
but you didn't care
like a knife you cut her deep
you must of loved to watch her bleed

this is for my friend who was deeply hurt by her "boyfriend"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Leo

    I can see that you and the girl are really close. i feel sorry for her though.
    be positive and look to the future.
    wonderfully written poem. like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    Wow.
    this was .. truely beautiful... because you are defending your friend , and its not becuase you have to, obviously you care for her very very much. and a lot of us do not have that at all.
    excellent rhyme scheme.
    :D
    Amazing write.

    Keep it up :]

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkEn HeArT

    Hey girl! man this poem sure dose hit me hard. after me and Justin split last night i just can seem to be alive. im so sad and this poem sure dose make me feel a little better! im glad u wrote it!
    love u tons
    Teane

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Good poem I feel really sad now 5/5
    Rachelle

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