Good poem I feel really sad now 5/5
Rachelle

Hey girl! man this poem sure dose hit me hard. after me and Justin split last night i just can seem to be alive. im so sad and this poem sure dose make me feel a little better! im glad u wrote it!
love u tons
Teane

Wow.
this was .. truely beautiful... because you are defending your friend , and its not becuase you have to, obviously you care for her very very much. and a lot of us do not have that at all.
excellent rhyme scheme.
:D
Amazing write.

Keep it up :]

I can see that you and the girl are really close. i feel sorry for her though.
be positive and look to the future.
wonderfully written poem. like it