Her fairytale ending

by Alex   Jun 24, 2008


All you wanted was your fairytale ending,
But that seems to be falling apart right before your eyes.
Your left all alone, with your heart needed mending.
Could this really be happening?

All you wanted was the most perfect guy,
Though it's been known that it's impossible for quite some time.
So your sitting here all alone with a tear in your eye.
Could your prince really be a frog after all?

All you wanted was your life to go right,
For everything to go just as you planned.
You wanted the most perfect life.
Could it all really be falling apart?

All you wanted was happiness and joy,
To live perfectly and carefree.
But you were the easiest target to destroy,
I guess not everything ends with happily ever after.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Haley

    Good job. very true. Many frogs come in go in life but soon you'll find your prince. Nice flow a lot of people can relate to this. keep up the great poems!

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    Starting off positive
    yumy poem
    i liked it
    okay tips
    a~ Line length again. It varies too much. It makes me stumble across simple words in akward places. either make them all long or make them all short
    b* your vocabulary is decent. but it is all common language. go out on a limb and be different. change the pattern. add spicy flavor in. mix in some honey. butter up the reader.
    c~ your ryhming still sounds forced. I think its easier to not rhyme and if it rhymes it does but you like rhyming so you got to make it work for you. figure it out.
    good job!!

    Lexie

  • 16 years ago

    by Mason

    Very good poem.

    i liked it, i know how you feel (but with girls) haha

  • 16 years ago

    by Katherine Yager

    Wow....seems like u have had a lot to go through....
    what got my attn was the title....how every little girl wishes for a magic prince to take her away to pure happyness...well unfourcantly sometimes that never happens. i liked the poem tho...it was different but still spoke to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Cabrera

    Wow that was amazing. I guess it is everyones dream to have a fairytale life, but there is nothing wrong with dreaming : ) 5/5

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