I loved the rhythm you created here with your flawess choice of words. It all flowed just so naturally without anything feeling forced making this so much more fun to read. I liked the topic because it was haunting but deep. Well don *5/5*

Midas touch
`Clever. Though it's a "sad" poem, it adds amusement.

As you bury all you treasure
`did you mean "your" treasure?

Cliche, huh? I don't see much cliche to it... At times, it could just be that I'm reading it funny, but your syllabication once or twice seemed off, so your smooth wasn't as smooth as it could be, but it was still natural. It was amusing to read, and the word choice is haunting.

I think you did quite a nice job, quite frankly.
..__MiNDYY

Very nice rhyme and flow. Amazing work, however a sad poem. Great word choice, as well. Nice title, very fitting... Great work, 5/5

Nice poem. I think the rhyming was a bit forced but other than that you did a good job.

A short but sweet poem however most definately not one of your best, i mean no insult to you for I believe you are a great poet and know that you can do far better but i still like it^^

Oh...That was so awesome and well-written...I liked the flow of it...good job,plz keep it up5/5..

WOW! This is such an amazing poem! The rythym, the feel - I'm spellbounded and speechless to say the least.
It's short and simple but still effective enough to convey the underlying feelings and portray what needs to be said.
100/5 from me. It's a true and rare masterpiece!

Sounds like a dark fairytale. Good rhythm.

Good poem, the first stanza doesnt have the best flow, the last two lines of it mainly, but still a good poem

Great job. You are one of those poets that use rhymes with a natural flair. For that reason, your level is much higher but I would still like to see a free-style poem from you like the old master Frost or Whitman.