IF THERE WAS ANY FLOWER..

by ghassan khzouz   Jun 24, 2008


If the flowers were red..
And i was on your bed..
Kissing your forehead..
And telling you that without you i will be dead..
Then you can say i love you..

If the flowers were green..
And your love was unseen..
Your heart was so lean..
Then you can say that we are not going to be with each other again..

If the flowers were blue..
And i was wearing one shoe ..
And having a tattoo..
Then you can say that my heart is stick with a glue..

If the flowers were black..
And i was making an attack..
And i told you that i am not coming back..
then you can say that my heart was eaten by a shark..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    You have some very good lines and images here and the feelings come through. I would suggest not concentrating on the rhyme so much that you sacrifice the meaning/what you really want to say.

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hello
    I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
    I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
    You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
    Thanks alot
    Love

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