by Kayla Jun 24, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I try so hard not to cry, |
This was such a awesome poem with real good emotion!!!!!! |
by stephanie
Aww tear i know this feeling to well and im constantly struggling let me tell you i love this poem it really expresses my sorrow |
Your poem made me depressed, i know the feeling all to well, i tried for a year for my loved one, i actually still love her but i just try to push my emotions aside, your poem was great and i could feel the pain 5/5 |
by StandStill
Kayla, dear, it's a wonderfully written piece. the flow is smooth, the word usage is pretty......buttttttt.....you have to be careful about jealousy. it can quickly turn to anger or hatred, as i know from experience..*mutters*. i know you're smarter than that..I love you. ^.^ 5/5 |
by Singmehome
W-o-w....this really blew me away...seriously..i really like a very well written piece!!!! :P...5/5 |