W-o-w....this really blew me away...seriously..i really like a very well written piece!!!! :P...5/5

Kayla, dear, it's a wonderfully written piece. the flow is smooth, the word usage is pretty......buttttttt.....you have to be careful about jealousy. it can quickly turn to anger or hatred, as i know from experience..*mutters*. i know you're smarter than that..I love you. ^.^ 5/5

Your poem made me depressed, i know the feeling all to well, i tried for a year for my loved one, i actually still love her but i just try to push my emotions aside, your poem was great and i could feel the pain 5/5

by the way your improving so much im glad to read your poetry

Aww tear i know this feeling to well and im constantly struggling let me tell you i love this poem it really expresses my sorrow

This was such a awesome poem with real good emotion!!!!!!
I love your poems kayla they rock!!!!
This was super good and deep.
This is a poem that's easy to relate to.
I love it!!!!!!!
Just by reading the first part of the poem I knew I was going to be amazed!!!!
Real good!!!!!!!
5/5
xoxo
~jazelle~